Extra Credit Major Project: Detailed Revision Explanation

Part II: write the URL to the post on your site that provides a detailed explanation of what you’ve revised, based on this list and possibly other considerations, and how you revised it. Why did you make the particular changes you did?

Detailed Revision Explanation

I have revised my reading summary 5. I have done this by adding onto the post to make the word length more acceptable, since my first edition was way too short. I went into a large amount of additional detail, as well as adding in some multimedia. The photograph I...